NEW / IMPROVED BEATS:
* 'I'm so sorry' Laveau beat (top of Act I)
* A second Gretchen/Faustus scene (Act I) with a brief "More" reprise
* A new Act II opening/montage/song/turn: "24 Years" (lyrics/scene and audio below)
* Clarified 'Deal with the Devil' scene between Marie Laveau and Papa Legba (Act II)
* Clarified 'Once Upon a Time' / 'Quentin Tarantino' scene (Act II, near the end)
NOTE:
I haven't added the 'home life' / Faustus-Wagner run-in scene... the new Act II set-up with "24 Years" and original "Where Off/Where Now" achieves what I was thinking this scene would. I think the clarified Laveau/Legba and 'Tarantino' scene also help. The only thing I haven' addressed is what the Act II relationship between Faustus and Christopher is... but I kind of like it that way. Anyhoo... point is, for the time being, that's a choice not neglect.
Let me know if you have any thought or input. Thanks!!!